Query Materials Review
To help your query packet stand out to agents and editors.
One of the hardest parts of querying is putting together a query packet that will catch the eye of agents and editors. But we can help! We will review your query letter, plot synopsis, or the opening pages of your novel (or all three!) and offer suggestions to help your query packet make a lasting impression.
Query Letter Review
Your query letter is the first introduction of your novel to an agent or publisher. Whether they continue to read your submission will depend on your letter making a good first impression.
What’s Included
A review of your query letter, highlighting its strengths and weaknesses with suggestions for improvement
In-line comments on your query letter
View a sample Query Letter Review (PDF)
Your Investment
$50 for a single review
$75 for two reviews
Synopsis Review
Your synopsis should concisely explain the plot of your novel while still retaining your unique voice as a writer. Show agents that you’ve crafted a clear, engaging, cohesive, and satisfying story.
What’s Included
A review of your synopsis, highlighting its strengths and weaknesses with suggestions for improvement
In-line comments on your synopsis
View a sample Synopsis Review (PDF)
Your Investment
$50 for a single review
$75 for two reviews
Opening Pages Review
Ten pages isn’t very much room to grab a reader’s attention, but that is exactly what you need to do for an agent or publisher to be interested in your fiction manuscript. Your opening pages draw your reader into your world and story. Make your novel’s opening shine!
What’s Included
A review of your first 3,000 words (that’s approximately the first 10 pages), highlighting its strengths and weaknesses with suggestions for improvement
In-line comments on your submission
View a sample First Pages Review (PDF)
Your Investment
$125 for a single review
$200 for two reviews
Full Query Package
If you want to ensure that all parts of your query are agent-ready, consider our full query package, which includes all our query services at a discount.
What’s Included
A Query Review
A Synopsis Review
A Opening Pages Review
Your Investment
$175 for a single review
$250 for two reviews